テーマ①：研修最終日の感想（1〜2分）
あなたは研修最終日に、一人ずつ感想を話すことになりました。
以下の内容を英語で話してください。
- この研修に参加できて感謝している
- 世界中から来た人たちと話せてよかった
- 偏見を持たずに新しい文化を学ぼうとした
- 一番の学びは、積極的にコミュニケーションを取ることが大切だということ
- 英語はまだ表面しか理解していないと感じるが、これからも勉強を続けたい
- この経験は一生忘れない
my sentences
Thank you for today’s training program.
I’m really grateful to have met and talked with you from many countries.
I haven’t interacted with people who have different backgrounds from me, so i tried to figure out other country’s cultures without an open mind.
The key takeaway from this opportunity is that it’s important to communicate proactively.
This training teaches me some helpful ideas, but i feel like I’ve scratched only the surface of your countries, cultures. So I’d like to keep learning about English
chat gpt
採点
94/100
かなり良いスピーチになっている。特に最近練習したチャンクが自然に使えている。
- ✅ I’m really grateful to have…
- ✅ The key takeaway from…
- ✅ communicate proactively
- ✅ I feel like I’ve only scratched the surface
この4つはもう定着しているね。
一文ずつ添削
①
Thank you for today’s training program.
〇 通じる。
でも締めのスピーチなら、
✅ Thank you for this wonderful training program.
または
✅ Thank you for organizing this wonderful training program.
の方が自然。
②
I’m really grateful to have met and talked with you from many countries.
95/100
惜しい。
you from many countries より
✅ people from many countries
または
✅ people from all over the world ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
が自然。
③
I haven’t interacted with people who have different backgrounds from me, so I tried to figure out other country’s cultures without an open mind.
ここが一番修正したい。
① without an open mind ❌
意味が逆になってしまう。
- ❌ without an open mind
- ✅ with an open mind
② figure out cultures
figure out より
learn about
の方が自然。
修正版
I haven’t had many opportunities to interact with people from different backgrounds, so I tried to learn about other cultures with an open mind. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
④
The key takeaway from this opportunity is that it’s important to communicate proactively.
100/100
完璧。
⑤
This training teaches me some helpful ideas, but I feel like I’ve scratched only the surface of your countries, cultures.
ここも少し修正。
① teaches → taught
研修が終わったので
This training taught me…
② scratched only
自然なのは
I’ve only scratched the surface
③ your countries, cultures
少し不自然。
your cultures
だけで十分。
修正版
This training taught me many valuable lessons, but I feel like I’ve only scratched the surface of your cultures. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
⑥
So I’d like to keep learning about English
ここだけ少しもったいない。
ここまで「文化」の話をしてきたので、
So I’d like to keep learning about English and different cultures. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
の方がまとまりがいい。
完成版（ネイティブが話しそうな形）
Thank you for this wonderful training program.
I’m really grateful to have met and talked with people from all over the world.
I haven’t had many opportunities to interact with people from different backgrounds, so I tried to learn about other cultures with an open mind.
The key takeaway from this experience is that it’s important to communicate proactively.
This training taught me many valuable lessons, but I feel like I’ve only scratched the surface of your cultures.
I’d like to keep learning English and different cultures after I go back to Japan.
Thank you very much.
今日追加したいチャンク
- have the opportunity to interact with ～
- people from different backgrounds
- learn about other cultures with an open mind
- many valuable lessons
- keep learning English and different cultures
一点だけ特に覚えてほしい
今回一番大きかったミスは、
❌ without an open mind
だったこと。
