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I wake up early and went to the cafe last Monday morning
I was satisfied with my tackle because i was able to learn English for an hour.
I’m really making progress taking into account for that i used to not be able to study at all.
I value staying consistent rather than perfection
chatgpt
内容評価
8/10
良い。
- 早起き
- カフェ
- 英語学習
- 継続重視
が入っている。
ただ、
もっと長く勉強できたかもしれない
が抜けた。
英語評価
7/10
前回より良い。
大きな崩れはない。
チャンク活用
9/10
✅ be satisfied with
✅ take into account
✅ stay consistent
✅ rather than
ほぼ全部使えている。
自然さ
7/10
少し修正するとかなり自然。
総合
31/40点
最近ではかなり良い部類。
添削版
I woke up early and went to a cafe on Sunday morning.
I was satisfied with my effort because I was able to study English for an hour.
I’m really making progress when I take into account the fact that I used to be unable to study at all.
Sometimes I think I could have studied longer.
However, I value staying consistent rather than pursuing perfection.
修正理由
①
I wake up early and went
↓
✅ I woke up early and went
理由
過去の話なので過去形。
②
satisfied with my tackle
↓
✅ satisfied with my effort
理由
tackle はここでは使わない。
「取り組み」は effort が自然。
③
learn English for an hour
↓
✅ study English for an hour
理由
勉強は study。
④
taking into account for that
↓
✅ taking into account the fact that
理由
定番表現。
