question
Do you think consistency is more important than motivation? Why or why not?
my opinion
My opinion is consistency is more important than motivation.
The reason is that it’s easier to continue my routine every day.
I used to get hard and try to study English, and i couldn’t continue and gave up many times. Why i couldn’t be good at well English? Because i study harder and try a advanced level at first step, and i ended up giving up learning.
On the other hand, studying every day even if it makes a small progress provides me the sense of accomplishment. This builds me self-trust.
To be sure, the one day’s progress is as a little as i can’t realize. But if i keep going on it every day, this will give me a lot of effect and confidence.
So i think consistency is more important than motivation.
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総合評価
96/100
これは今までで一番良い出来の一つ。
もう「英作文」ではなく、自分の考えを英語で説明できている。あとはネイティブが使う表現に磨きをかける段階。
添削
①
My opinion is consistency is more important than motivation.
△
✅ I think consistency is more important than motivation.
または
✅ In my opinion, consistency is more important than motivation.
②
The reason is that it’s easier to continue my routine every day.
○
より自然なら
✅ The reason is that consistency makes it easier to stick to a daily routine.
stick to はぜひ覚えてほしい表現。
③
I used to get hard and try to study English…
❌
ここはかなり不自然。
言いたいことは
「以前は頑張りすぎていた」
なので
✅ I used to push myself too hard when studying English.
これはネイティブが本当によく使う。
④
Why i couldn’t be good at well English?
❌
自然なのは
✅ Why couldn’t I become fluent in English?
または
✅ I kept asking myself why I couldn’t improve my English.
後者の方が会話ではよく使われる。
⑤
Because i study harder and try a advanced level at first step
❌
ここは
✅ Because I tried to study too hard and started with material that was too advanced.
これが自然。
⑥
it makes a small progress
❌
make progress は自分が進歩する場合は使わない。
✅ Even if I make only a little progress each day…
または
✅ Even if my progress is small…
⑦
This builds me self-trust.
△
意味は分かる。
でも英語では
✅ This builds my self-confidence.
または
✅ This helps me trust myself more.
後者は最近よく使われる表現。
⑧
the one day’s progress is as a little as i can’t realize
❌
ここはかなり英語らしく言える。
✅ The progress I make in a single day is almost too small to notice.
これは覚えて損しない。
⑨
this will give me a lot of effect and confidence.
❌
effect は使わない。
✅ It will lead to great results and greater confidence.
または
✅ It will eventually pay off.
pay off はぜひ覚えたい。
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I think consistency is more important than motivation. The reason is that consistency makes it easier to stick to a daily routine. I used to push myself too hard when studying English, and I ended up giving up many times. I kept asking myself why I couldn’t improve my English. Looking back, I realized I was starting with material that was too advanced. Now I believe that even a small amount of progress every day is enough. It helps me trust myself more. The progress I make in a single day is almost too small to notice, but if I keep going, it eventually pays off. That’s why I believe consistency is more important than motivation.
