my sentences
I was going to study at the cafe today.
I couldn’t concentrate on learning much because it was packed with many people.
I used to think that i had a wasteful day in the same situation.
Buti i moved from the cafe and studied only for thirty minutes.
I recently value what i can do in the situation rather than having a perfect environment.
chat gpt
総合評価
95/100
これはかなり良い。
「状況 → 昔の自分 → 今の自分 → 学び」の流れが自然に書けている。以前より英語で考える力が付いてきている。
細かいところだけ直そう。
添削
I was going to study at a cafe today.
✅ OK
より自然には at a café（冠詞を付ける）。
I couldn’t concentrate on learning much because it was packed with many people.
△
learning より
✅ studying
また
packed with many people でもいいけど、ネイティブは
- The café was crowded.
- It was too crowded.
をよく使う。
なので
I couldn’t concentrate on studying because the café was too crowded.
が自然。
I used to think that I had a wasteful day in the same situation.
△
have a wasteful day はあまり言わない。
ネイティブなら
I used to think I had wasted the whole day.
または
I used to think the whole day was a waste.
But I moved from the cafe and studied only for thirty minutes.
○
自然。
さらに自然なら
But I found another place and studied for 30 minutes.
または
But I went somewhere else and studied for 30 minutes.
I recently value what I can do in the situation rather than having a perfect environment.
○
意味は伝わる。
でもネイティブなら
Recently, I’ve come to value doing what I can in the situation I’m in rather than waiting for the perfect environment.
またはもっと簡潔に
Recently, I’ve learned to focus on what I can do instead of waiting for the perfect environment.
この focus on what I can do はかなり自然。
ネイティブならこう書く
I was going to study at a café today, but it was too crowded for me to concentrate. I used to think the whole day was a waste in situations like this. But this time, I found another place and studied for 30 minutes. Recently, I’ve learned to focus on what I can do instead of waiting for the perfect environment.
今日覚えてほしい表現（2つだけ）
① the whole day was a waste
I used to think the whole day was a waste.
「今日は無駄だった」が非常に自然。
② focus on what I can do
I focus on what I can do.
自己成長・仕事・勉強・筋トレ、どれにも使える万能表現
