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Accounting is suits to me, but I recently feel be tired with my company. I want to change my job to rise up my salary, so I’m studying uscpa to go deeper into accounting.
I should focus on uscpa, but I’m too busy to learn it. I figure out that I have to concentrate on it. What is important for me? It is important for me that I keep going rather than motivation.
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Accounting suits me, but I’ve recently started feeling tired of my company.
I want to change jobs to increase my salary, so I’m studying for the USCPA to go deeper into accounting.
I should focus on the USCPA, but I’ve been too busy to study.
I’ve figured out that I need to concentrate on it.
What’s important to me?
It’s important for me to keep going rather than rely on motivation.
修正理由
Accounting is suits to me
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✅ Accounting suits me
理由
- suit は動詞
- is は不要
I recently feel be tired with my company
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✅ I’ve recently started feeling tired of my company
理由
- recently は現在完了と相性が良い
- tired with より tired of が自然
change my job to rise up my salary
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✅ change jobs to increase my salary
理由
- change jobs が定番
- rise up salary は不自然
- increase my salary が自然
studying uscpa
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✅ studying for the USCPA
理由
- study for 試験
too busy to learn it
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✅ too busy to study
理由
- 試験勉強は study
I figure out that
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✅ I’ve figured out that
理由
- 「気付いた」は現在完了が自然
It is important for me that I keep going
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✅ It’s important for me to keep going
理由
- 英語では to不定詞の方が自然
良かったチャンク
✅ go deeper into accounting
✅ focus on the USCPA
✅ I’ve figured out that …
